Nov 9, 2010

abrupt




Playing with the words from Three Word Wednesday
abrupt, kernel, wield

Winds abruptly change
wielding powers sinks the ship
down at the seadbed
a shell seals its kernel.

I thought I was transparent
you could see my pearl
winds abruptly changed
you call it sand now.


Swinging boat,abruptly
Wind
blows from the past
I yield to the wielder
Wait for me , I'll be back










2 comments:

  1. the kernel wields
    an abrupt
    birth

    :-)

    "... a shell seals its kernel" --> gorgeous image ... and that second verse ... heartbreaking ... and then I also think of Blake: "To see a world in a grain of sand ..."

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  2. the kernel wields
    an abrupt
    birth


    WOW Jaliya !!! AWESOME !!!!!
    WIll make it a new post!. Thank you :)

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