Jan 19, 2011

surreal




3WW descent, kill, surreal



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Descents to the great water
kills the reason's guard dogs

bathe her being into vastness.

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Ascents with a painting

art critics say "surreal"

she says " remedy "

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10 comments:

  1. love that - art critics say "surreal"
    she says " remedy "
    perfect.
    xo K

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  2. Remedy, indeed. I fully understand The Arts healing properties!
    Here's my 3WW for this week:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/19/in-my-tucson/

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  3. Sheilagh Lee says:Remedy! one word but it says a lot Great poem.

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  4. the expression of water rushing over... thaz what i heard...

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  5. Love the surreal/remedy combo for art; interesting, have never thought of it that way
    A nice piece

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  6. Wow.
    I like that. Very impressive.

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  7. What a delightful remedy. I love the weaving of paintings and poem.

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  8. A real flow. Compact.

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  9. love the switch form surreal to remedy. Nicely done.

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  10. Smiling , blushing :)
    Thanks everyone for your nice comments.

    i found interesting those word games. Three words , irrelevant at first create a little story.

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