crack the iced layer
shutting in your heart
if you dare
brake the mirrored window
concealing the view
if you dare
go beyond the practical hardships
like a tough shell
cutting your way
smash it
if you dare
and dive in
to the core
where the essence lays
if I dare to ask, "dare you?"
a pearl is not a promise.
I dare you to ask, dare I?
to crack the ice
to break the mirror
to see what's beneath
ask, dare I?
or
you already know
you are broken
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my contribution to the 3WW,
This week's words:
Dare; verb: Have the courage to do something or defy or challenge (someone) to do something.
Essence; noun: The intrinsic nature or indispensable quality of something, especially something abstract, which determines its character.
Practical; adjective: Of or concerned with the actual doing or use of something rather than with theory and ideas.
Essence; noun: The intrinsic nature or indispensable quality of something, especially something abstract, which determines its character.
Practical; adjective: Of or concerned with the actual doing or use of something rather than with theory and ideas.
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This is deep, intense.
ReplyDeleteVery deep indeed, but with Jung in your sidebar I would expect nothing less :o) ... and the line 'a pearl is not a promise' just wonderful!
ReplyDeleteSheilagh Lee said:Very deep and with great feeling
ReplyDelete'Crack the ice, break the mirror and see what's beneath." Very deep introspection. It is bad enough figuring out other people let alone ourselves!
ReplyDeletethank you all :)
ReplyDeleteits almost automatic writing. I have to read it again to see what I have written
thanks for visiting :)
That was cool - loved the directness.
ReplyDeletethis was powerful and challenging! Very well written.
ReplyDeletetrisha
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Much beatiful blog.
ReplyDeleteAll the best.
Charly