Apr 7, 2011

odd

peculiar attraction
my first feeling
when  I met you

Diamond,
my first image of you
before I saw your photo

a piece of fabric
I thought we were waving.
a sail
for a boat to surf the waves.

your warps my wefts
your wefts my warps
Intertwined

and suddenly
an adamant "No"




 3WW : adamant, fabricate, peculiar
talks between

5 comments:

  1. Altonian7.4.11

    An eloquent way of describing - unrequited love?
    Yes, surely.

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  2. Sheilagh Lee11.4.11

    Wow what agreat way to portray unrequited love, Great poem.

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  3. Unknown12.4.11

    I like the metaphors used. Well done. Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/12/goddess-creates/

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  4. horse and moon12.4.11

    thank you. :)

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  5. Lisa14.4.11

    I like this.

    lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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