Hush, don't speak !
I wish I have told you
that critical moment
before the loud, persuasive words
of how much I don't care
and you don't care too
absorbed us.
Hush, don't speak!
I wish you have told me
before that silly game
was about to start.
Neither of us said that
we choose to make noise
and word by word
a wall appeared between us.
Hush, don't speak!
Hear the riches hidden behind the silence.
Alas, its too late to say that
Hush, don't speak
we both said
and then
Silence
no loud noises
no persuasive words
but what it hurts
is the absence of the riches.
Silence
and a wall.
My heart is not glad.
Yours?
.
.
.
3WW words : loud, persuasive, riches
This reads almost like a note - a great note - and so heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteAs ThomG says, a very touching note...
ReplyDeleteHere is my 3WW:
don't be shocked, I can handle power tools
thank you Thom . I loved those words
ReplyDeletegautami , thanks for you comment and thanks for visiting :)
silence is not golden always. a fabulously written piece of poetry. full of beauty and wisdom.
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